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Tuesday, 29 June 2010

Interview with Dea Southward

Boy, it's hot out there. So stay inside for a few minutes and enjoy an interview with another great aspiring author. Today we're talking to Dea Southward.

Dea is a YA Writer of Paranormal and Horror, a Converse enthusiast, a gamer, coffee lover, and insomniac. Any of those traits sound familiar? :)

Welcome, Dea! Let's dive right in. What is the name and genre of the manuscript you're currently pitching?

The manuscript I am currently pitching is called The Face of Death, it is a young adult Paranormal Romance with elements of horror.

What’s the story about?


Daisy Fitzpatrick is 17, a psychic, and has been targeted by a cult who thinks she is the Anti-Christ. The cult wants to sacrifice Daisy to bring about the rapture. If that wasn't enough to deal with, she's also fallen head-over-heels for a boy with only one month to live.

Wow, sounds mysterious and exciting. How did the idea of the story come to you?

The story came to me while I was finishing up my last manuscript. My muse and I really fought on when I was going to start it. Like most of my ideas, I was out getting coffee at 2am. It came to me that I really wanted to write a story about a psychic, and I've always been fascinated by cults. It just came together from there.

Those pesky muses, always picking inopportune times, lol. What stage are you at now?

The manuscript is completed, I just finished some agent requested revisions. Hopefully if the agent agrees with the changes, I will have representation soon.

That's awesome! Good luck to you. So do you have a critique partner or beta readers, or do you self-edit?

I go to bi-weekly writing networking meetings where I read some of my material. Other than that I have two amazing beta readers that give me insight.

What’s the hardest part of writing for you?

Editing is the worst part for me. If I don't sit down and really force myself to do it, I will put it off forever. My 5th finished manuscript has been waiting on edits for about a month now.

Let’s get to know you on a deeper level. What do you absolutely have to have nearby when writing?

Coffee, and my iPhone. Hands down. Everything else I can pretty much live without.

If you could have any super power, what would it be?

That's a tough one. But I would have to say the ability to teleport.

Quick writing test! Use the following words in a sentence: styrofoam, turnips, and killer whale.

Yesterday, I tried to feed my styrofoam killer whale turnips, he hasn't spoken to me since.

Heehee, yeah I guess he wouldn't. Here’s the part where you thank the people who are supporting you. Who would you like to give a shout out to?

My best friend and amazing beta reader Meg, The Writers Network of Central Connecticut, and everyone who has believed in me throughout this process.

And finally, where can people find you online?

Twitter: dsouthward
Website is coming soon.


Thanks so much for the interview, Dea. It was great chatting with you. And I'm crossing my fingers that you get The Call soon from that agent.

Tuesday, 18 May 2010

Interview with Liz Czukas

Ready to meet another wonderfully talented aspiring writer? Well, I've got one for you! Let's welcome Liz Czukas. Liz is a 31 year-old, married mother of a 3 year-old. She lives outside Milwaukee, WI and her "real" job is as a Labor & Delivery RN. Amazing!

Good to have you here, Liz. Tell us a bit more about yourself.

I am an aspiring writer of both adult and YA fiction, generally of the romantic comedy bent. I have trouble taking real life seriously, so there is no way I can be in complete control of a fictional world and do much in the angst department. I'm a jeans and t-shirt kind of girl, love anything spicy and consider dancing to be the only viable form of exercise. Bad grammar on public signs sets my teeth on edge and the word 'pants' will always make me grin.

How long have you been writing?

The first time I really remember writing was when I was nine years old. I've been writing pretty much continuously since then. Almost always novels--even when I was way too young to turn out more than 25,000 words or so.

And now you've written a few more books that you'd like to get published. What is the name and genre of your current manuscript?

Right now I'm in the middle of revisions on my manuscript THE SORBET GUY which is an adult romantic comedy.

Nice title. What’s the story about?

THE SORBET GUY is the story of Joss (Jocelyn) and her ridiculous journey through the unstable world of dating, and her unique arrangement with her good friend Matt, who is always there to help her "cleanse the palate" after a break-up.

Sounds great, and I think it could have date-night movie potential. How did the idea of the story come to you?

Honestly? Listening to "Mr. Brightside" by The Killers. It was just a flash of an idea that begged to be played with.


I love music-inspired stories. What is your next step – are you self publishing, querying for an agent, etc.?

Right now I'm polishing the manuscript (I hope!) to get back on the querying journey. I'm looking for an agent. I know I don't have the business savvy to manage my own career. I've always thought expertise should be left to the experts.

Agreed! Do you have a critique group/partner or beta readers, or do you self-edit?

All of the above. I'm generally a pantzer type writer--that is, I don't plot or outline, I just write until the story is done. Then I let it sit and mature in an oak barrel for a few weeks. Then, I do an editing pass on my own before sending it out to some beta readers and my critique group. The final say is always mine, of course, but I would say I get an average of six pairs of eyes on a manuscript before I think it's done.

Hehe, I need one of those oak barrels. What’s the hardest part of writing for you?

Having enough time! I work part time and take care of my son the rest of the time. My husband is a very loveable workaholic, who is gone long hours. The only time I'm really free is after bedtime. I wish I had more!

Wait! You're describing my life, lol. Any tips you’ve learned about writing you’d like to share?

I'd give all the basic writing advice, because it's all true. Read, and read widely, not just in your genre. Write everyday if you can. Show your work to other people, and take their advice when you should.

Also, I'd recommend getting on Twitter for any writer. There's a huge community out there using #amwriting #writing and a gazillion other trending tags. I've met some wonderful people that way, and gotten so much great information from and about agents--it's priceless. Not to mention free!

Agreed again! Let's talk about your inspirations.

My favorite authors run the gamut from Stephen King to Maureen Johnson with frequent stops in Nelson DeMille and J.K. Rowling, just for starters.
My favorite YA books of all time are The President's Daughter series by Ellen Emerson White.
My role models for romantic comedy/chick-lit would have to be Megan Crane, Caprice Crane, Meg Cabot...and that's just the C's.

Let’s get to know you on a deeper level. What do you absolutely have to have nearby when writing?

Only the Internet. I'm an obsessive researcher. Even when the details are insignificant or don't appear in the story, I need to know the who/what/where/when and why of my character's lives.


For instance, I was just working on a very romantic scene and I had to shop around figleaves.com until I found the right bra for my heroine. Weird, right?

Not weird to me; I think that's awesome. Here’s the part where you thank the people who are supporting you. Who would you like to give a shout out to?

My husband, who has learned to live with my loud typing as the soundtrack to his evenings.
My extended family, who is doing a marvelous job of pretending my quest for publication is not at all outrageous.
My crit group, The Inkslingers, who have brought me out of my fetal position of shame for wanting this life, made me a better writer every time we talk, and put me into fits of giggles every single Wednesday.

And finally, where can people find you online?

I've got a website www.lizczukas.com
a blog http://lizczukas.blogspot.com
a facebook fanpage http://www.facebook.com/lizczukaswriter
and a twitter profile https://twitter.com/lizczukas

Thank you so much for talking with us, Liz.

Thanks for this opportunity. I really enjoyed myself!

Me too. And please let us know when you've reached the next stage of publication. I'm crossing my fingers for you.

Wednesday, 10 March 2010

Interview with Dawn Maria

Hello everyone! Grab a seat and get comfy because today we're having a chat with Dawn Maria of Scottsdale, Arizona.

Welcome to We Do Write, Dawn. Tell us a little bit about yourself.

I'm married (just celebrated our 20 year anniversary), have two teen boys (17 & 14, which means I'm drinking more) and am a proud pet owner (one cat, two dogs, everything I own is covered with pet hair). By day I work for the school district as a Para-Educator. I'm a one-on-one aide to a special needs student. I love my day job. I've been writing since I was a kid. I taught myself to type on my grandparents' Smith Corona, which sits in my office today. I've always wanted to be a writer, but finally got serious about it five years ago when I started taking Creative Writing classes at Phoenix College. I graduated from their Creative Writing Program in December 2008.

And you're actually a published writer. I read you've had some of your work published in magazines, and you've got a short story coming out this spring. Can you tell us about that?

I'm just beginning to see more of my work get accepted in the last year. One of the goals I set for myself was so make sure I send out at least one submission a month. It's a realistic goal for my lifestyle (day job, family and writing life) and keeps me moving toward my dream of getting my novel published. It feels good to have something out there too. I always feel hopeful when I submit. Rejections can be tough, but the more you send stuff out, the more likely you'll get something accepted.

That's good advice. And now you're writing a novel! What is the name and genre of your manuscript?

The book is called WHERE ARE THEY NOW? and it's Chick Lit (I'm not ashamed to say, though the new moniker I keep seeing is Upmarket Women's Fiction). The book explores the distance between what we think we want from life and what we actually have through the adventures of four women who used to know each other in the 80's and are brought back into each other's lives unexpectedly.

Sounds like something I'd like to read. Is your manuscript complete or still a work in progress?

I finished my book, but I'm in another round of revision, so I guess it's correct to say WIP.

Do you have a word count goal, and how far along are you at this point?

This round of revision should add another 25,000 words to the current 58,000. I'm getting deeper into the characters in this revision and slowing down the pace. I missed a lot of great opportunities in the current draft.

What is your next step when you're done with revisions?

Once I'm done, the next step is finding an agent. I submitted to about fifteen last year and had a few requests for partials, but not a full. I made the typical emerging writer mistake of submitting before the MS was really at its best.

I've read that happens to a lot of aspiring writers. We're so anxious to get our material out there that we jump off the diving board before the pool is filled. Another good tip for everyone out there - make sure your work is actually ready. So, do you have a critique group or beta readers, or do you self-edit?

I have a former classmate who reads for me, but I'm hoping to get connected with a novel writing group. I have a wonderful accountability partner, Deni, whom I met on Twitter, and we check in daily to motivate each other. I'm getting better and better at self-editing each year, but there is no substitute for fresh eyes looking at your work.

That's true. What’s the hardest part of writing for you?

Right now finding the time to sit down and write is the hardest part. During the summer, when I'm off work, I've attended writer's residencies and retreats, usually for two weeks. That time made all the difference. The point I'm at in my revision requires that kind of concentrated time and I don't have it. I write during my break at work and before and after work when I can. The problem with after work is that's when I'm in mom-mode. Life with teens is as busy as it was with babies and toddlers, which has been a real shock.

I'm not good at staying up until midnight, so I feel very frustrated. Spring Break hits in a couple of weeks and I will likely sequester myself in my office. I find that once I sit down, getting to work comes easily.

Any tips you’ve learned about writing you’d like to share?

I think it's important to understand what your creative process is and work with it. Often writers go to conferences and hear about other people's processes and then walk away feeling they're doing something wrong. Trust your process. I don't write everyday and that's okay. I write Monday through Friday. Often I do end up writing on the weekend, and if so, that's bonus time. I think frequency is more important than quantity. However, the more time you spend writing, the more work you'll produce. Know what you own demons are. My big one is time management, so I focus on getting my butt in the seat, even if it's brief.

I have a notepad that has the days of the week on it. I try to sit down every Sunday and map out what I hope to get done M-F. Because my time is so limited, this helps ensure I don't forget something and quiets the to-do list voice in my head.

Who are your inspirations?

If I had to pick one book that has inspired and taught me the most about craft, I'd have to say Tim O'Brien's THE THINGS THEY CARRIED. I'm drawn to unusual structure and that book turns structure on its ear. It's fiction that reads like non-fiction, a novel that reads like short stories. A novel really is a blank canvas that you can fill how you want. That's so cool! We get to make those choices and that part of the process is exciting to me.

Anne Lamott's BIRD BY BIRD is a resource I return to again and again. It's the best reference out there.

In my reading life, I'm a huge Jane Austen fan. I also read everything Jane Green and Claire Cook put out. They're two women's fiction writers whose work and careers inspire me.

Let’s get to know you on a deeper level. Can you name three things about yourself people may not know (or maybe they do know but they are special traits/hobbies/quirks)?

1.      Well, even though I read and write Chick Lit, I'm a huge Science Fiction geek. Star Wars, Firefly, Battlestar Galactica, I love them all and am very active in a fantastic online community, Galactic Watercooler (GWC). I have a couple geek quotes in my novel and will likely have a geek character in the next one. Who knows, maybe one day I'll try and write a Sci-Fi novel.
2.      I am one of those obsessive scrapbook moms. Please don't hate me because my sons' baby books are done! I love scrapbooking and get out to special events to crop whenever I can. A photo album scrapbook is the story of your real life.
3.      Quirks? I am very anal about how the dishwasher is loaded. What's weird about this is that I'm a complete slob. The kitchen (or the entire house for that matter) can be a mess, but I'll make sure the dishwasher is loaded efficiently. I think it has something to do with being a visual person. It drives my husband and sons crazy because I always redo their work.

Hehehe, that is kind of quirky, but endearing. Here’s the part where you thank the people who are supporting you. Who would you like to give a shout out to?

My husband and sons are very supportive. They all understand what "I'm working!" means now (though it took a while). They also provide great material for my blog.

I have to give a shout out to my BFF, Kathryn, because she comments on every blog post I write, God bless her. My friends from GWC are also incredibly supportive. It means so much to me when people take time out of their busy schedule and read my blog.

And finally, where can people find you online?

First there's my website and blog- Method to the Madness www.dawnmaria.com

I love Twitter and am on it all the time. Please say hello to me @DawnMariaAZ

I've avoided Face Book, but will probably join in the summer when I'm on break from work. I am so distracted by Twitter, I'm scared to add another website to play around in!

Yes, I know what you mean. But I'm glad you took the time to be distracted by this interview, because it's been great getting to know you. Thank you so much for chatting, and I wish you much success with your novel! Keep us up to date with any developments!